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I follow Elizabeth Bear’s blog and she had a really interesting post recently. I’m fascinated by the distinction between a character being acted upon by the story and a character being in control of themselves in the story. The idea that just changing a few words can give the power back to your character, make them stronger and make the story more engaging seems almost like magic to me.

I think that this is one of the reasons that I’m so interested in writing. Anyone can throw down some words and call it a story - I don’t think that there’s much skill required to just put words to paper and string a narrative together. It’s the quality of the narrative and its holding power where the magic lays.

The correct words evoke a vision.

The better words evoke a feeling.

The best words put you in the story.

2 Responses to “Writing Insight - Characters in Control”

  1. Ernest says:

    Learning these things turn a mediocre writer into a great one, but they also spoil you for casual reading. You’ll no longer be able to read inferior literature for pleasure (which isn’t exactly a bad thing).

  2. matt says:

    While my casual reading has definitely been on the decline lately, I think that I’ll be able to exercise a variant of “willfull suspension of disbelief” when I’m reading the simpler stuff for fun.

    I guess only time will tell.

    -Matt