The old man stumbled across the moonlit snowfield, straining to hear any sounds of pursuit.

4 Responses to “White Night”

  1. Valerie says:

    I like it. But do you mean Moonlight, like a name or moonlit?

  2. matt says:

    Thanks, Val. It was indeed a typo and is now fixed. I also added a comma because I think it improves readability.

  3. Valerie says:

    Uuu, I really like it now. I know you have been quite busy with the home building but have you gone any further on the first sentences? There were quite a few I really like.

    Valerie

  4. matt says:

    No, I haven’t fleshed any of them out. I do however keep coming up with more of them (as indicated above).