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White Night

Written by matt on February 5, 2008 — 4 Comments

The old man stumbled across the moonlit snowfield, straining to hear any sounds of pursuit.

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  1. Valerie's Gravatar Valerie
    February 6, 2008 at 9:40 pm | Permalink

    I like it. But do you mean Moonlight, like a name or moonlit?

  2. matt's Gravatar matt
    February 7, 2008 at 5:43 am | Permalink

    Thanks, Val. It was indeed a typo and is now fixed. I also added a comma because I think it improves readability.

  3. Valerie's Gravatar Valerie
    February 7, 2008 at 6:59 pm | Permalink

    Uuu, I really like it now. I know you have been quite busy with the home building but have you gone any further on the first sentences? There were quite a few I really like.

    Valerie

  4. matt's Gravatar matt
    February 11, 2008 at 11:05 pm | Permalink

    No, I haven’t fleshed any of them out. I do however keep coming up with more of them (as indicated above).

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